Writing new short poetry, feedback appreciated

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Trying to increase my pen game and tongue game to become some sort of maestro wordsmith. I wrote something that might be suited here. It’s a short poem called AEIOU. Let me know what you think and I might push into longer poetry and maybe fuller stories.

At all times exited I often undresss
Awaiting enticing I’ll only uplift
Any extra Ifs objections figure out
Attention extends insertion of unplanned
Accepted erection increases opening unrelenting
Allocation eventuates inside ova
Unprotected
All energies intertwined over
Undulating
As expressively intense orgasms unabated

NSFW: yes

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